Prometheus Erred, novel in progress

[seanr]

I'm writing a science fiction novel in my spare time. Most, if not all, of the near future art I've posted over the last year is from this story, including my ISS-2 wip (can't remember if I posted that here, if not, it's over at SFM (http://www.scifi-meshes.com/vbtemp)).

http://www.webolutionary.com/prometheus

I've been having intermittent connection problems with my site, so if it doesn't load, just try it again later. It seems to be working fine now, though.

[seanr]

I've currently gotten 26 pages written, up from 16 pages when I last posted it here nearly a year ago. Not much progress, but all of it has been in just the last few days. I finally decided to get busy on it. ;)

You'll notice a question mark surrounded in perentheses highlighted in yellow about halfway through, I'm at a complete loss for the conclusion to that simile. If you have any ideas, I'm all ears.

[moovok]

Finally! I was looking through some disks of my past time in 3DG, things I've downloaded and not looked at and stuff, and I saw this HTML.

I read it almost instantly, and it left me at:

"Yes. And I think we’ll be powerless to stop them."

I'm glad there's another chapter to this. Sorry it took me so long Sean, but I did get around to reading it. I love how you described the rooms, though sometimes I couldn't picture it. Also found a spelling mistake somewhere, can't remember where though :)

Keep me updated!

[General Phoenix]

I'm still very interested in seeing where this goes. The additional work is good, though it doesn't seem quite as "polished" as the first part. However, getting the idea down is the most important step, so keep up the good work. :)