great feedback guys, ok I'll go to work on it. I don't think the neck will change much in terms of its width, but I infer that the shoulders are probably not wide enough. Someone mentioned it on another board as well..
I think what I'll do is widen the shoulders, ribs and hips some. Smooth out the adams apple and tone down the neck tendons. And the comments about the chin is a good one, maybe that'll help her looks some. thanks guys,
