The first one seems a bit dark and without a clear focus. Maybe bring up the light a bit (although this is interstellar space) or else add a nebula or a star background (I'm guessing stars should be visible in interstellar space, although I've never actually been there). You could also make the asteroid much bigger in the background to emphasize its size (sort of like the death star!). Another interesting view might be to bring the camera closer to the ship to get a kind of wide-angle lens effect with the engines receding at different angles.
The second one is great. Maybe since the registry isn't visible on the engines or on the front of the hull, you could add the name of the ship in on a small arc above the phaser turret like is done on the back of navy ships and on the back of my UES Fireball.
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