I like the ships, great scene. I think the beam looks really nice.
I had a couple of thoughts - it might be a little more dramatic if there were little sparks or something where the beam is hitting. My other thought was that the blue smoke escaping is really great, but at first I thought it was a background nebula. What if it was brighter near its emission point, perhaps white, then faded to its current dark blue colour? One other thing was that perhaps the upper right spaceship could be moved a little just because at first I wasn't sure which ship the nacelle was attached to.
I had the same problem with my latest scene because my HSMs are the same colour as the Enterprise, so visually it was hard to break them up. I found it was necessary to jigger the lighting just so that the eye could separate the ships into foreground/background.
Anyway, I think it's a great image as it is.
[This message has been edited by meshula (edited 07-11-2000).]
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