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Old August 9th, 2000, 01:05 PM   #2
meshula
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These are great! I have two suggestions -
image 1 - the target ship is too dim, on my monitor i can barely make out what the pirates are stalking. bright her up and you're gold, i think.

image 4 - seriously cries out for motion blur. unless you're familiar with the smaller ship, it's hard to tell if it's coming or going. also as a composition, the smaller ship perfectly touches the center of the larger ship which makes for a very static composition. if you moved it about 100-200 pixels up and right i think it would be a much more exciting image

these comments aside, this is a wonderful set of 4.
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