Getting there! I think you should make the brightest streams a tad more transparent, so we can vaguely see the backround star. The plasma stream should also spread out a bit more as it gets close to the star and should blend more in color.
Having said that, what you have done so far is awesome! It is a really killer concept. I am just trying to help you make it spectacular! This will be one of the scenes that will be posted on the page?
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