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Old March 11th, 2001, 04:07 PM   #1
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By popular demand!!!!

Ok ok... only one person said they wanted to read it...

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Written a couple of years ago.
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Old March 11th, 2001, 05:17 PM   #2
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Interesting story...

In its established continuity, it works.

(Hey, nobody said that our various stories were all set in the SAME Trek universe. )

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Old March 11th, 2001, 09:52 PM   #3
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Ah yes, the return of Trelane, IIRC.

BTW, Warrior, you'll be happy to know I bestowed the illustrious title "Old Man" to someone else.
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Old March 11th, 2001, 10:09 PM   #4
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Oh really? Who? *is jealous now*
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Old March 12th, 2001, 12:08 AM   #5
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Oh really? Who? *is jealous now*


Tron, one of our super moderators (as in can mod all forums instead of one, not a superhero joke thing) at Spacebattles. He's in his forties.
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Old March 12th, 2001, 07:59 AM   #6
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Well! I declare!

That's over there. I can still have the title over here, right? Huh? Huh? Well?
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Old March 12th, 2001, 10:31 AM   #7
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Brill story. A spelling mistake (not a real biggie) about in your first time you recall Risa, you spelt it Rysa (nothing big as I said).

The story, no offence, has a lack of gripping the reader. Though he has the good groundings to start to get into a good story, I do hope you carry this on, it would be good to see what the Captain does in the rest of the story.

Other than that, good description with the sunlight, I always like description in a story, it's something all stories need to make a point to the reader and to picture something in their heads.

Good work WarriorDL!!!!

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Old March 12th, 2001, 12:55 PM   #8
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...umm No spelling mistake on that.

In TOS there is a Rysa. Diff planet than the Risa in TNG.

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In TOS there is a Rysa. Diff planet than the Risa in TNG.
Ah! Other than that, a good story. Gonna finish it or is that it????

(There goes my knowledge of Star Trek down the window)

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It is finished. Did you read all 20 parts????
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That's over there. I can still have the title over here, right? Huh? Huh? Well?


We'll see.
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Part One was very good - I'll have to get into the other 19 later...


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This thing still exists?
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