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Old February 26th, 2003, 11:49 AM   #1
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Default No Seanr, but hey?! - New Orlean's Class Hallway

Well, I thought I'd post my lastest project. I really got into this one, so I'll be working on some more interior shots for a bit I think. This is actually version two, version one was started off by what I remembered from TNG...then I looked at some reference pictures and found out my memory isn't all that good! LoL! Anywise, here they are, I've just linked them since they're 1280x1024 in size ( my new desktop res now ).

http://fam.webtrekkie.com/startrek/fed/hallway3.jpg
http://fam.webtrekkie.com/startrek/fed/hallway4.jpg

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Old February 26th, 2003, 12:59 PM   #2
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Nice work so far. The lighting seems a bit bright, even by TNG standards, and the font you're using on the signage is wrong. But it's a good start, and I'm interested in seeing more.

(BTW, before you ask, I don't have the fonts. Also, I'm more of an art critic than an artist, so I can't give pointers on how you could improve it, other than broad comments like "that's nice, that isn't." Just so you know. )
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Old February 26th, 2003, 03:16 PM   #3
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The first thing that caught my eye was the carpet texture. It seems a bit too low-res.

I'm afraid I don't have a clue about the lighting - I dfon't do 3D work. But I'm pretty sure I have the font you need for the doors...

I can e-mail it to you if you like.
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Old February 27th, 2003, 12:10 AM   #4
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Here's an update version of the mesh with adjusted lighting, I was a bit suprised at how much better it looked darker, I must say. Interior Lighting is a skill I'm still working at. As for the Font, GP I'd love to have it , but for this mesh, the font that I used was intentional, as I wanted to be to different in some of the little details from the Galaxy class. As for the carpet....I didn't think that myself, but if it caught your eye, I should play with it. I'm working on some better textures for it now. Anywise, here's the updated links:

http://fam.webtrekkie.com/startrek/fed/hallway3B.jpg
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Old February 27th, 2003, 01:08 AM   #5
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Another update, fixed the carpet ( I like this better, I must say ) and re-worked the doors a bit as well....

http://fam.webtrekkie.com/startrek/fed/hallway5.jpg
http://fam.webtrekkie.com/startrek/fed/hallway6.jpg

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Old February 28th, 2003, 12:28 AM   #6
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Much better detail on the carpet - though it does seem that the pattern is a little "off." The darker lighting does work a lot better.

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Old February 28th, 2003, 12:59 PM   #7
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Scenes 5 & 6 are dead on!! I'd think I was on the set or something. great Job.
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Old March 2nd, 2003, 06:38 PM   #8
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Those doors are in the wrong place - there's nowhere for them to retract into the wall. :P The set quality is great, though!

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