My former RPG character in MS Paint

http://www.geocities.com/lizasimonov...mspaint/1.html

I did the first (blue) one as a drawing of an RPG character I was playing back then, Dessie.

Anyway and the next three are me redoing it. I only had a JPG left so I had to start from scratch really (well only the black outlines I had)

oh yeah
I can't get the eyes to fit with the mouth
so if anyone has ideas.

[p.s. Cargile]

I don't know what you mean by not getting the eyes right with the mouth. As a rule the corners of the mouth align with the center of the eye. It looks to me, a veteran of drawing faces, that you you have it. The first (blue) one stands out the most because the subject is looking at the reviewer. However, the others ones are not wrong. I don't see a problem with any of them. They are all pretty damn good to me. I favor Blue because I like the idea of the subject looking at me. This is the way I normally draw faces myself.

This foursome has a very Andy Warhol appeal to it, and would look good as a poster as is. Blue offsets the overall stabilty of it by looking at the viewer while the others slyly look to the side. There is balance and imbalance, which makes it very attractive. You should leave it alone and make a collage of these four as they are presented on your webpage.

This is something that I would want to hang on my wall.

I meant that the lips are more detailled than the eyes.

the blue one is the old one btw. I was looking to improve it but everyone seems to like the old version better.

but I think I might make a 4 pieces thing of it indeed, but it'll never be a poster, it's too small for a poster.